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Gayla Reid (talk | contribs) (A few substantive changes and a formatting problem in the Resources and links) |
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4. '''In terms of resources''', I took out the Dial-a-Law Dating Violence script (this section isn't about dating) and added the LSS family law website stuff on child protection (I think you get a much bigger bang for your buck having this resource in there). But the text does not seem to be fitting inside the text box - you can see the problem in View. (Hunted about to try to solve this but could not.) | 4. '''In terms of resources''', I took out the Dial-a-Law Dating Violence script (this section isn't about dating) and added the LSS family law website stuff on child protection (I think you get a much bigger bang for your buck having this resource in there). But the text does not seem to be fitting inside the text box - you can see the problem in View. (Hunted about to try to solve this but could not.) | ||
5. This is quite outside the realm of copy editing, but I found it extaordinary that a chapter on Family Violence would start off with a discussion of tort law. . . ok for the classroom but for ordinary readers? If I was doing a substantive edit, I would move up the call the police, call VictimLink to be the lead items. | |||