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This is outside the realm of copy editing, but I found it strange that a chapter on Family Violence would start off with a discussion of tort law. . . If I was doing a substantive edit, I would move up the call the police, call VictimLink to be the lead items, and go on from there. The website has a how-to focus rather than a learning focus, and is for people who are dealing with the issue under discussion (and their intermediaries). | This is outside the realm of copy editing, but I found it strange that a chapter on Family Violence would start off with a discussion of tort law. . . If I was doing a substantive edit, I would move up the call the police, call VictimLink to be the lead items, and go on from there. The website has a how-to focus rather than a learning focus, and is for people who are dealing with the issue under discussion (and their intermediaries). | ||
[[User:Gayla Reid|Gayla Reid]] ([[User talk:Gayla Reid|talk]]) 17:04, 30 April 2013 (PDT) | [[User:Gayla Reid|Gayla Reid]] ([[User talk:Gayla Reid|talk]]) 17:04, 30 April 2013 (PDT) | ||